The piece starts out with a sort of intro before the base rhythm kicks in. Do you think that this intro is too long? Does the piece flow well when in this structure?
At some points you can hear the base player talking. Is this too distracting? Should I play around with adding more far-off voices?
What phrases caught you off guard or stuck with you?
Was there enough variation in the music?
Would you like to hear more of my voice overlapping?
I'm excited to hear your feedback!