Here is my second draft :) I added in a short 3rd poem in the beginning, and cut some of the others down slightly. I also changed the volume of the background music and fixed a few sound gap errors. I'm not sure how I should end it/if the ending is okay as it is now. It just ends at the final poem, the "nightmare".. should there be one last poem to conclude? a waking up poem?
I've already hit the three minute mark, so I'm wondering if I should cut some out then add alternative clips. What do you think?