How Long is the Night _6

I'll be interested to hear how this sounds in the Planetarium. Layering together sounds, I've really come to appreciate how different the piece sounds on different speakers. It's hard to know what will be the right mix. I'm struggling to get to a place where everything feels polished and balanced. I'm not sure if it's just from listening to it a million times, but the narration is starting to feel like the weakest link to me. I'm thinking about getting someone with a more interesting voice record it instead, and would love some input on which phrases are effective/ineffective.