Hey all,
So I decided to change my subject for this assignment, the other person I interviewed for my first draft ended up not being a story I wanted to pursue. This "re-up" is longer than 3 minutes, and I feel that it could be cut down significantly. What should I cut out? Do you want to hear more about the neighbors or are you content with just hearing the two speakers stories about the block they lived on/re-worked houses on?
Thanks, see everyone on Monday.
Melania Plasko
I think that both of them are really decsriptive, enough to keep the listener attentive. If you were to shorten this I think just taking some of the "re-worked houses descriptions" out and letting them describe the block in general.
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