Thursday, February 7, 2013

The Grass Is Always Greener (Final)

I want to thank everyone for their feedback! I constructed a new, more complete ending using a second interview. I also brought back the lawn mower noise to "book end" the piece. I added a reference time of night & time of year, as well as a follow up with another moment he saw this neighbor. I hope you guys enjoy this final iteration as much as I do!

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