A Dark Night (NEW Story)

I was unable t continue interviewing my cousin for the second iteration of the first version or any other family members for that matter. I chose to interview someone else so that I was able to go back and interview again if necessary. I also had a few technical difficulties, Hindenburg was no longer available. So all previous work done on Hindenburg was now in vain (because it could be opened but couldn't be saved or exported) so I used Final Cut Express to continue editing. I think it sounds pretty choppy. Please let me know about any things you find interesting and or necessary to add etc.

Updated Red Handed TP

Couldn't help working on this a bit more... I took out the slow moving car chase and added a bit at the end.

Hannah: Black and White and On My Patio Final

Hey team, I know this is supposed to be a final but I am really not considering it that because I still think it needs a lot of work. I can't seem to get the story to fit in three minutes and as it is right now it feels rushed. Do you think there are parts that could be taken out to give the rest more breathing room or no? I also thought about adding sound but as it stands I don't even think there is room for it? I am at a loss. Love to hear what you all think. Hannah

Diamond in the Rough

Red Handed TP Revenge

Red Handed TP Revenge

Here I was mainly working with trying to manipulate the pacing of the story to build interest-- adding pauses in some parts and speeding it up in others. It was hard to figure out what to end with.

Also, any title suggestions would be much appreciated.

Summer Blackout

Beautiful and Greying Neighbor Bob

I interviewed him a second time and got that last comment at the end that I really like. But, now it is 15 seconds over even after I went back a cut a few things! Any other suggestions as to where I might cut it?