Kerrytown Piece Version 3

  Alright guys, here's version three.
I switched up the order of some of the sound bites in hopes that they would make more sense together, and got rid of some redundancies.
Added in some narration to help the listener through the piece.  Tried to keep my voice as casual as my interviewees.  Kept the narration as minimal as possible.
I'm excited to hear what you think!

Green Monopoly Mullholland Houses Pt 2

Closer to being done I think! I took everyones advice from class and made a transcript, and cut out the unnecessary information. It's still about twenty seconds over three minutes, but I couldn't quite figure out what I should cut. It all seemed to be relevant and interesting information to their story, however are there any suggestions of what could still be cut out? Thanks! Melania P.

The Grass Is Always Greener (Final)

I want to thank everyone for their feedback! I constructed a new, more complete ending using a second interview. I also brought back the lawn mower noise to "book end" the piece. I added a reference time of night & time of year, as well as a follow up with another moment he saw this neighbor. I hope you guys enjoy this final iteration as much as I do!

Diamond, Draft II

Sound Walk

Frosted TIps

Hannah: Black and White and On My Patio #2

Hey guys,
So I added a new ending and was wondering what you think about it? I plan on going back and re-recording all of it together (and fixing up/tweaking the beginning) because I think you can hear the difference in the takes. In terms of the narrative arc do you think it is effective and interesting? I took out the bit about the phone and the cows in the distance for the sake of time but maybe I could keep that and lose something else somewhere? Interested in hearing your feedback.

Hannah